From 38f805ec182d708bcf42f831207559812c476b1f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: yaworsky <yaworsky>
Date: Thu, 17 Nov 2005 04:31:14 +0000
Subject: Changed slightly.

---
 doc/src/intro.xml | 46 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 37 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/intro.xml b/doc/src/intro.xml
index 0afbf96..7c3d104 100644
--- a/doc/src/intro.xml
+++ b/doc/src/intro.xml
@@ -1,38 +1,66 @@
 <section>
 	<title>What's this</title>
 	<para>
-This is an implementation of syslog daemon and client for native win32 platform.
-It complies to <ulink url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3164.txt">RFC 3164</ulink>,
-<quote>The BSD Syslog Protocol</quote>.
+This is another syslog for windows, it includes daemon and client.
+Features:
+		<itemizedlist>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+<ulink url="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc3164.txt">RFC 3164</ulink>-compliant;
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+high performance;
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+message forwarding;
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+log rotation;
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+			<listitem>
+				<para>
+completely open-source.
+				</para>
+			</listitem>
+		</itemizedlist>
 	</para>
 </section>
 
 <section>
 	<title>What for</title>
 	<para>
-Maybe you are:
+Primarily it was written for myself to help to create portable software.
+So if you are:
 		<itemizedlist>
 			<listitem>
 				<para>
-porting existing UNIX software to native win32 platform;
+porting existing UNIX software to native win32 platform,
 				</para>
 			</listitem>
 			<listitem>
 				<para>
-writing portable software;
+writing portable software,
 				</para>
 			</listitem>
 			<listitem>
 				<para>
-writing pure windows software but understanding that EventLog sucks and looking for an alternative.
+writing pure windows software but understanding that EventLog sucks and looking for an alternative
 				</para>
 			</listitem>
 		</itemizedlist>
-I hope that in any of these cases this stuff will be useful for you.
+then I hope that this stuff will be useful for you too.
 	</para>
 	<para>
 Of course, you may just use the daemon as the network message collector.
-But in this case you better look at UNIX.
+But I think that any UNIX alternative is much better.
+Not because this stuff is not so good (I hope), just because the underlying system is better.
 	</para>
 </section>
 
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